Fubaka's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[RoadTrippers - Asleep at the wheel]

Keep going. You're off to a great start with this!

CannedGoblin93 responds:

Thank you so much

[A Family Meeting]

Not bad, though I think this one was a bit too similar to Firth's work.

Imo, the 'sibling' looked a bit like Homestar Runner. Was that intentional?

Also, I do appreciate the nod to the true classic piano piece of our time, but I felt it was not quite earned like it was in Salad Fingers 4. Perhaps of you had made this longer and given its 'story' time to expand.

Keep making things. You are on the right path.

gigglewizard responds:

Was more of an experiment, trying to learn after effects, but yeah, it's a bit firthy. He's a big insperation. The homestar similarity was accidentally at first but I decided to run with it. I hope to make more story driven work soon.

[Fay - School shooting]

The ideas are there. The character is there. Now you just need to get the drawing style there.

I'm not gonna suggest you make it look more like a traditional animation. That's boring. However, it is apparent that you are still starting out when it comes to animation. Keep working on your craft, and take notes when watching other peoples' animations you like, and you will get there eventually.

Best of luck!

willcamick responds:

Thank you for your review. Ill take what you say into consideration :)

['Learning to walk' (my first flash movie)]

The animation wasn't bad by any means, but on Newgrounds, we expect cartoons of more substance.

You're off to a good start with the style though. If you expanded this and added some music at least, you'd have a good thing going here.

D0S81 responds:

thankyou, i appreciate the constructive criticism, a lot of the work on newgrounds blows my mind, 'Mr Bees' comes to mind. the guy that does that has some skill. It was actually 'Hyun' of those awesome stick fights that told me about macromedia 8> I know i have a long long way to go before imanywhere next to that caliber of animation, but fingers crossed. Its very time consuming, i worked on this for about four days for a few hours a day. it only takes so long as im self taught. hopefully the next vid i do will be better.

[Super Smash Wars: 7]

No Kirby? 0/10

Kidding. This is really cool, and I'd be stoked if you make it into a real series.

RetroSleep responds:

Haha, Kirby almost made it in too.

Thanks, I don't have any actual plans to make a series, I'm a one shot kinda guy. haha

[Woobirds' Valentine]

No reviews yet? We'll have to fix that.

I thought the animation was very well done, and the music was a very good choice. Did not quite understand the beginning silhouette sequence, but I shall let artistic liberty fly for this one.

Keep up the good work!

PhilStankus responds:

Thank you!

[Ink Blots: Inx]

Very cute.

Animation was well-done. You should definitely make your future installments longer though.

InkBlotCreations responds:

Oh, don't worry, I will. This is really just a taste. Until then, you at least have something to enjoy! <3

[Yup.]

You've built quite a collection for this little character of yours.

It's begging for a full length animation.

grimharbor responds:

Thank you and I completely agree! I've actually got 7-10ish 5 minute episodes planned out (depending on length, right now I'm trying to keep them under 5 minutes a piece) and a rough animatic for one of the episodes.

[SAWRY!]

My god, that was magnificent.

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